Re: [dane] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-dane-ops-14: (with COMMENT)

Viktor Dukhovni <ietf-dane@dukhovni.org> Wed, 05 August 2015 03:57 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dane] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-dane-ops-14: (with COMMENT)
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On Tue, Aug 04, 2015 at 08:45:40PM -0700, Ben Campbell wrote:

> Thanks for this. I only have some editorial comments, and others have
> beaten me to the punch on all save the following:
> 
> -- Section 8, first paragraph:
> 
>    This section updates [RFC6698] by specifying a requirement on the
>    TLSA Publisher to ensure that each combination of Certificate Usage,
>    selector and matching type in the server's TLSA RRset MUST include at
>    least one record that matches the server's current certificate chain.
> 
> "Requirement on the ... publisher to ensure...that each combination...
> MUST include..." is sort of an odd construction for a 2119 MUST.  Does
> the following capture the intent?
> 
> NEW:
>    This section updates [RFC6698] by specifying that the
>    TLSA Publisher MUST ensure that each combination of Certificate
>    Usage, selector and matching type in the server's TLSA RRset includes at
>    least one record that matches the server's current certificate chain.
> END

Yes.  Thanks.

-- 
	Viktor.