[dane] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-dane-smime-15: (with COMMENT)
Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> Wed, 15 March 2017 15:09 UTC
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Subject: [dane] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-dane-smime-15: (with COMMENT)
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Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-dane-smime-15: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dane-smime/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for this document. I have a small list of comments: 1) You are pointing to Unicode 5.2, which is rather old. You should reference the most recent version. 2) In Section 9.2: NSEC and NSEC3 need references. 3) In Section 11: <pedantic comment alert> All of your references are Informative. This is not correct, as several of the references are needed to implement or understand this specification. It doesn't matter that this document is Experimental, references needed to implement or understand the document still need to be Normative.
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