[dane] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-dane-smime-15: (with COMMENT)

Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> Wed, 15 March 2017 15:09 UTC

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Subject: [dane] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-dane-smime-15: (with COMMENT)
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Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dane-smime-15: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you for this document.

I have a small list of comments:

1) You are pointing to Unicode 5.2, which is rather old. You should
reference the most recent version.

2) In Section 9.2: NSEC and NSEC3 need references.

3) In Section 11: <pedantic comment alert> All of your references are
Informative. This is not correct, as several of the references are needed
to implement or understand this specification. It doesn't matter that
this document is Experimental, references needed to implement or
understand the document still need to be Normative.