Re: [Detnet] John Scudder's Yes on draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof-10: (with COMMENT)

[Balázs Varga A <[e-mail]>]

HI John,
Many thanks for your review. The intention was to use "e.g.," at both places.
I will double-check the whole document to ensure that "i.e.," and "e.g.," are
correct. 
Thanks
Bala'zs

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Subject: John Scudder's Yes on draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof-10: (with COMMENT)

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Thanks for this well-written document. Thanks also to Roman for serving a
special guest AD.

I have one question. In section 4.3, you have "Service-ID values are
provisioned per DetNet service via configuration, i.e., via the Controller
Plane". Later, in section 5, you have "This information is provisioned per
DetNet flow via configuration, e.g., via the controller plane."

Are the respective usages of "i.e." and "e.g." deliberate? That is, is your
intent that in section 4.3, service-ID values should be provided provision only
via the controller plane, but in section 5 you intend that Control and
Management Plane Parameters can be configured any way, and the controller plane
is merely an example?

(My rule of thumb is that i.e. should be read as "in other words", and e.g.
should be read as "for example".)