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Re: [Detnet] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-07: (with COMMENT)

Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com> Tue, 08 September 2020 06:51 UTC

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From: Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com>
To: Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-07: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Erik,

Many thanks for your review. 
- Nits: all accepted and updated

Thanks & Cheers
Bala'zs


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Subject: Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-07: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-07: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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[[ nits ]]

[ section 6 ]

* Perhaps "flow specific" -> "flow-specific"

* s/needed to provided/needed to provide/

* Perhaps "treatment needed to meet" -> "treatment to meet"
  (or s/needed/necessary/)

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