[Detnet] typos in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-00
"Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com> Tue, 06 February 2018 15:12 UTC
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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: János Farkas <janos.farkas@ericsson.com>, Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com>
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Subject: [Detnet] typos in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-00
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Hello Janos and Balazs (Happy new year : ) Reading https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-00 I came onto the following: Use of "DetNetwork" -> seems that a Net->Network transform happened to widely Section 6.4 discusses a service rank but is located in the Flow section. I expected a slightly different structure that would reflect the initial dichotomy in flows and services, where flows comprise source and destination information, as well as status, etc... That would place sections 7, 8 and 9 in section 6, and 10...13 into a new "flow" section that would include 6.4. For flow identification over the UNI, would be good to mention the 5-tuple (source/destination addresses/port and flow label) in IPv6 and the 4-tuple in IPv4. Cheers, Pascal [banner4] Pascal Thubert Principal Engineer Chief Technology & Architecture Office pthubert@cisco.com<mailto:pthubert@cisco.com> Phone :+33 497 23 26 34 Mobile :+33 619 98 29 85 Cisco Systems Building D (Regus) 45 Allee des Ormes - BP1200 06254 MOUGINS cedex France Cisco.com<http://www.cisco.com/global/FR/> [Description: Think before you print.]Think before you print. This email may contain confidential and privileged material for the sole use of the intended recipient. Any review, use, distribution or disclosure by others is strictly prohibited. If you are not the intended recipient (or authorized to receive for the recipient), please contact the sender by reply email and delete all copies of this message. Please click here<http://www.cisco.com/web/about/doing_business/legal/cri/index.html> for Company Registration Information.
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