[Detnet] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-yang-19: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 11 February 2024 05:40 UTC

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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-detnet-yang-19: No Objection

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# Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-detnet-yang-19
CC @ekline

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## Comments

### S8

* ipsec-spi is also defined in the same way in RFC 4302.  RFC 4301 says
  it's a 32-bit number, but doesn't seem to say anything about zero being
  reserved.

## Nits

### S4

* The section references for the sub-layers are all 3.x and look like they
  should 4.x