[Detnet] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-13: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 16 December 2020 07:14 UTC

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Subject: [Detnet] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-13: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-13: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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In Section 1, I don't understand what the paragraph starting "In the IETF ..."
means, because of those three words.  Is it different outside of the IETF?

Section 5.4.2:
OLD:
    Using wild cards for these attributes are specified ...
NEW:
    Use of wild cards for these attributes is specified ...