Re: [Detnet] Fw: I-D Action: draft-ietf-detnet-topology-yang-01.txt

[t petch <[e-mail]>]

This I-D will need some administrative fixes sooner or later and I 
prefer the sooner.

IANA Considerations must register the namespace and the YANG module - 
else there is no YANG module.  I note that this section says it can be 
removed on publication; well, not if you want a YANG module.

detnet-topology is a quite a clunky prefix - topology is usually 
abbreviated to 'topo' in a context like this (eg. in teas modules and 
their augments)

a module import must be a Normative Reference (which tells me whether or 
not I expect to understand this one).

unpublished documents, such as 'draft-ietf-detnet-architecture' are 
usually referenced as 'RFC CCCC: <title of document>' which reduces 
subsequent updates to this I-D

Web contact is ood - https://datatracker

contacts should be Web, list, authors - WG Chairs are not worth a 
mention - too unstable!

Tom Petch

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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Deterministic
> Networking (DETNET) WG of the IETF.
>
>     Title           : Deterministic Networking (DetNet) Topology YANG Model
>     Authors         : Xuesong Geng
>                       Mach(Guoyi) Chen
>                       Zhenqiang Li
>                       Reshad Rahman
>     Filename        : draft-ietf-detnet-topology-yang-01.txt
>     Pages           : 18
>     Date            : 2023-04-07
>
> Abstract:
>     This document defines a YANG data model for Deterministic Networking
>     (DetNet) topology discovery and capability configuration.
>
>     The YANG module defined in this document conforms to the Network
>     Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA).
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-detnet-topology-yang/
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> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-detnet-topology-yang-01.html
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