Re: [dhcwg] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC3315 (5450)

"Bernie Volz (volz)" <volz@cisco.com> Fri, 03 August 2018 14:05 UTC

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From: "Bernie Volz (volz)" <volz@cisco.com>
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This does seem to be a valid issue (though it is minor).

And, it does not exist in draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-13, which is replacing RFC 3315.

Note to RFC Editor  (Lynne)... given that draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-13 lists the errata included in the document, perhaps this one should be added to the list. See Appendix A, #26.

Note: Updated a few email addresses and removed Jim Bound's.

- Bernie

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Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC3315 (5450)

The following errata report has been submitted for RFC3315,
"Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol for IPv6 (DHCPv6)".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5450

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Nikolai Malykh <nmalykh@gmail.com>

Section: 18.2.5

Original Text
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   The server MUST include a Server Identifier option containing the
   server's DUID in the Reply message.  If the client included a Client
   Identification option in the Information-request message, the server
   copies that option to the Reply message.



Corrected Text
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   The server MUST include a Server Identifier option containing the
   server's DUID in the Reply message.  If the client included a Client
   Identifier option in the Information-request message, the server
   copies that option to the Reply message.



Notes
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Incorrect option name

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RFC3315 (draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-28)
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Title               : Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol for IPv6 (DHCPv6)
Publication Date    : July 2003
Author(s)           : R. Droms, Ed., J. Bound, B. Volz, T. Lemon, C. Perkins, M. Carney
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Dynamic Host Configuration
Area                : Internet
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG