Re: [dhcwg] WG last calls on several documents - draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-09
"Bernie Volz (volz)" <volz@cisco.com> Sun, 10 August 2008 16:37 UTC
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] WG last calls on several documents - draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-09
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Here's the first of my promised 5 document reviews. This one is for draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-09. The following are all minor and could probably be addressed in a note to the IESG or even ignored: - Section 2, Terminology Add definition for "DHCP Proxy"? Remove "third-party" from definition of "DHCP relay agent". Also, add reference to RFC 3315. - Section 4, Overview of Virtual Subnet Selection Usage In first paragraph, for "This will affect a relay agent, in that it will have to ensure that the packets sent to and received from the DHCP client flow over the correct VPN", I wonder whether this wording implies more than just DHCP traffic. Technically, all a relay agent is concerned with is DHCP traffic. But as a relay is often on a router .... In the 2nd (full) paragraph on page 8, "in" is missing "... or a VSS option [in] the Relay-forward message ...". - Section 7.2, Returning the DHCPv4 Sub-Option In the first paragraph, understand should be understands in "... whether or not the DHCPv4 server understand[s] the VSS sub-option." - Section 8, Security The wording of "The VSS option could be used by a client in order to obtain an IP address from a VPN other than the one where it should." is a bit ackward I feel? Perhaps just state that a client's use of the option would allow it to obtain address(es) on any and multiple VPNs. - Section 9, IANA Usually this section requests what IANA should do so I'd change "IANA has assigned the value of TBD for the DHCPv6 VSS option defined in Section 3.3." to "IANA is requested to assign a value to the DHCPv6 VSS option defined in Section 3.3 [from the DHCPv6 option registry]." Again, all of these are extremely minor and I would like to see this document move forward. - Bernie -----Original Message----- From: dhcwg-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:dhcwg-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Bernie Volz (volz) Sent: Wednesday, July 30, 2008 8:30 AM To: Ralph Droms (rdroms); DHC WG Subject: Re: [dhcwg] WG last calls on several documents I'll review the following during their last call: draft-ietf-dhc-subnet-alloc-07 (Informational) draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-09 draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-reconfigure-rebind-04 (To be refreshed) draft-ietf-dhc-container-opt-01 (To be refreshed) And, I might as well agree to do the last one too ... draft-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption-00 - Bernie -----Original Message----- From: dhcwg-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:dhcwg-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Ralph Droms (rdroms) Sent: Wednesday, July 23, 2008 4:49 PM To: DHC WG Subject: [dhcwg] WG last calls on several documents We have several documents that are ready for last call, which will be started shortly after the WG meeting next week. Please review these documents in preparation for the last calls. As always, we will need explicit positive responses during the last to determine WG consensus for forwarding the documents to the IESG. Here is the list of documents; the documents are Standards Track unless otherwise indicated: draft-ietf-dhc-subnet-alloc-07 (Informational) draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-09 draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-reconfigure-rebind-04 (To be refreshed) draft-ietf-dhc-container-opt-01 (To be refreshed) draft-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption-00 To ensure we do get reviews on these documents, we're soliciting volunteers who will commit to reviewing the documents during the last call. Please respond to the mailing list if you want to volunteer to review one or more of these documents. - Ralph _______________________________________________ dhcwg mailing list dhcwg@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dhcwg _______________________________________________ dhcwg mailing list dhcwg@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dhcwg _______________________________________________ dhcwg mailing list dhcwg@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dhcwg
- [dhcwg] WG last calls on several documents Ralph Droms
- Re: [dhcwg] WG last calls on several documents Mark Stapp
- Re: [dhcwg] WG last calls on several documents Frank Xia
- Re: [dhcwg] WG last calls on several documents Bernie Volz (volz)
- Re: [dhcwg] WG last calls on several documents - … Bernie Volz (volz)