Re: [dhcwg] WGLC for draft-ietf-dhc-rfc8415bis / mention of RFC 8987
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From: Esko Dijk <esko.dijk@iotconsultancy.nl>
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Thread-Topic: Re: [dhcwg] WGLC for draft-ietf-dhc-rfc8415bis / mention of RFC 8987
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] WGLC for draft-ietf-dhc-rfc8415bis / mention of RFC 8987
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Hi all, One first WGLC comment on Section 19.1.3: I noticed this section does not mention the existence of RFC 8987, which contains some important (crucial?) requirements for DHCPv6 relays to make PD work. I believe that at the very least this RFC must be mentioned; otherwise a reader looking into DHCPv6-PD that starts with this document may never discover these important requirements. (Note that these requirements are only for the DHCPv6 relay agent co-located with the first-hop router to which the DHCPv6 client requesting the prefix is connected.) Best regards Esko IoTconsultancy.nl | Email/Teams: esko.dijk@iotconsultancy.nl