Re: [dhcwg] Kathleen Moriarty's No Objection on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-prefix-length-hint-issue-05: (with COMMENT)

tianxiang li <peter416733@gmail.com> Wed, 15 February 2017 03:37 UTC

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From: tianxiang li <peter416733@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 15 Feb 2017 11:36:53 +0800
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] Kathleen Moriarty's No Objection on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-prefix-length-hint-issue-05: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Kathleen,

Thank you for the review, please see inline.

Cheers,
Tianxiang

2017-02-15 6:18 GMT+08:00 Kathleen Moriarty <
Kathleen.Moriarty.ietf@gmail.com>gt;:

> Kathleen Moriarty has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-prefix-length-hint-issue-05: No Objection
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> I'm okay with the reasoning for the security considerations section, but
> think it might be good if a general reference for security of DHCP was
> listed as well.  Since an older RFC is referenced, any references from
> that one might be out-of-date.
>

[Tianxiang] Thanks for pointing that out, we could add a sentence
referencing RFC 3315 for security considerations in DHCP. However, as I
understand both RFC 3633 and 3315 would be obsoleted
by draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis once it's approved, should we add reference to
3315bis instead? My current proposal is as follow:

OLD:
This document introduces no new security considerations over those already
discussed in section 15 of RFC3633, as this document provides guidance on
how the clients and servers interact with regard to the prefix-length hint
mechanism introduced in RFC3633.

NEW:
This document provides guidance on how the clients and servers interact
with regard to the DHCPv6 prefix-length hint mechanism. Security
considerations in DHCP are described in section 23 of RFC 3315. Security
considerations regarding DHCPv6 prefix delegation are described in section
15 of RFC 3633.