[dhcwg] summary of last call comments and their resolution for draft-ietf-dhc-timezone-option-02.txt
Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com> Thu, 17 August 2006 09:19 UTC
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Subject: [dhcwg] summary of last call comments and their resolution for draft-ietf-dhc-timezone-option-02.txt
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Dear all, Thank you for your review of draft-ietf-dhc-timezone-option-02.txt. Here is a summary of the comments we received and how we addressed them: 1. The DHCPv4 option length was changed from two octets to one octet; 2. Quotes were removed in some places and typos were fixed; 3. We added an additional reference to cal-dst.el to demonstrate how one could derive a POSIX 1003.1 string from a TZ Database name based on comments received from John Hawkinson (jhawk); 4. We added additional security considerations with a warning about changing the timezone on critical systems; 5. We clarified the deprecation text based on Shane Kerr's proposal and added some text for transition based on Stig's comments; 6. We reorganized the introduction and replaced the abstract based on Ralph Droms' comments; 7. We added text that the if the server implements either option it SHOULD implement the other, based on Stig's comments; 8. We removed the words "So Called" referring to TZ Database; and finally 9. We added numerous acknowledgments, as neither Paul nor I are DHCP experts (although we're both learning). Thank you for improving this document. A new draft-ietf-dhc-timezone-option-03.txt has been submitted to reflect these changes. If I have missed something or if you are unhappy with the wording of any of these changes, please let me know. Regards, Eliot _______________________________________________ dhcwg mailing list dhcwg@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dhcwg