[dhcwg] review of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-05 chapter 16
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Mon, 08 August 2016 15:12 UTC
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Subject: [dhcwg] review of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-05 chapter 16
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Here is the review of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-05 chapter 16 (same number in RFC 3315) Client SA/IF Selection pages 42-43: - 16 page 42: the titles of 16.1 and 16.2 can't be understood without a good knowledge of DHCPv6. I recommend to explain the "purpose of the configuration" are either "address assignment" or "prefix delegation". Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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