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Re: [Diffserv] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-diffserv-ba-def-00.txt

George Uhl <uhl@mamba-e.gsfc.nasa.gov> Wed, 16 February 2000 21:32 UTC

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I'm responding as I'm reading the draft.  There is another sentence
cutoff at the end of the first paragraph of the Introduction section.
As I browse the draft it appears that text is getting cutoff along
page boundaries.

BTW, I'm reading this draft from:

http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-diffserv-ba-def-00.txt

George Uhl
 
> 
> The last sentence in the first paragraph of the Abstract is incomplete:
> 
> A major feature of diffserv is that only the components 
> applying the rules at the edge need to be changed in response to 
> short-term changes in QoS goals in the network, rather than 
> 
> 
> George Uhl
> 



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