Re: [Dime] [dime] #41: Need better overview

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Mon, 10 February 2014 16:39 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dime] [dime] #41: Need better overview
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I can volunteer for that, with the caveat that it probably won't happen before the IETF89 draft deadline.

On Feb 10, 2014, at 10:37 AM, Steve Donovan <srdonovan@usdonovans.com> wrote:

> I think the way to handle this issue in the issue tracker is to assign it to one of the authors and that author would then be responsible for generating overview text.
> 
> Steve
> 
> On 2/8/14 11:02 AM, lionel.morand@orange.com wrote:
>> Hi Ben,
>> 
>> Any proposal?
>> 
>> Regards,
>> 
>> Lionel
>> 
>> -----Message d'origine-----
>> De : DiME [
>> mailto:dime-bounces@ietf.org
>> ] De la part de dime issue tracker
>> Envoyé : vendredi 7 février 2014 21:55
>> À : 
>> draft-docdt-dime-ovli@tools.ietf.org; ben@nostrum.com
>> 
>> Cc : 
>> dime@ietf.org
>> 
>> Objet : [Dime] [dime] #41: Need better overview
>> 
>> #41: Need better overview
>> 
>>  The overview is short on explanation. We need a high level, non-normative
>>  "how it works" description of the mechanism, including roles,
>>  responsibilities, associations, and information flows. This doesn't need
>>  too much detail (e.g. message and AVP definitions belong elsewhere.)
>> 
>>  Some of the information in the endpoint architecture section would be
>>  better off here.
>> 
>> 
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