[Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-extended-naptr-06
"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Wed, 06 April 2011 15:47 UTC
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From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>
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Subject: [Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-extended-naptr-06
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Hi,
I performed the AD review of draft-ietf-dime-extended-naptr-06. The
document is in good shape and I plan to send it to IETF Last Call in the
next day.
I have one minor comment and one question. These should be resolved
together with other IETF LC comments:
1. The clarity of the text could be improved if a number of acronyms
would be extended at the first occurrence: NAPTR, NAI, CER/CEA (and I
may have missed a few)
2. idnits warns:
-- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 2915
(Obsoleted by RFC 3401, RFC 3402, RFC 3403, RFC 3404)
I think that this is OK, but please check again that I am right.
Thanks and Regards,
Dan
- [Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-extended-napt… Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
- Re: [Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-extended-… jouni korhonen