Revised draft of Last Call document (draft-miller-media-type-cellml)
Andrew Miller <ak.miller@auckland.ac.nz> Mon, 03 July 2006 14:08 UTC
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Subject: Revised draft of Last Call document (draft-miller-media-type-cellml)
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Hi all,
Please find attached a revised draft of the CellML Media type
registration, which is in Last Call for Informational status until 19th
of July 2006. The draft has been submitted to the IETF secretariat, but
will not appear until on or after Monday, Jule 10 at 9:00 AM ET, due to
the upcoming IETF meeting.
The revised draft differs from the previous one in the following respects:
1) It fixes a few minor ID nits:
a) Minor formatting changes such as fixing a 73 character line,
b) Changes a "recommended" to "RECOMMENDED", and a may to "can" to
avoid confusion with MAY.
2) The draft now explicitly states that utf-8 is the only acceptable
character set. This has always been in the CellML Umbrella Format, but
now it is in the draft as well, for clarity.
3) The Abstract is no longer redundant with the Introduction, and the
Discussion section has been merged into the Introduction.
4) An ambiguous use of the word "registry" (between the IANA types
registry and the CellML Umbrella Format registry) has been fixed.
Please CC any comments regarding this draft to ak.miller@auckland.ac.nz
Best regards,
Andrew Miller
- Revised draft of Last Call document (draft-miller… Andrew Miller