Re: [dispatch] AD Evaluation of draft-pd-dispatch-msrp-websocket

["Ben Campbell" <[e-mail]>]

One more thing: IDNits emits the following:

  -- The document seems to contain a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work, 
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. Is any part of the document that old? I suspect this is due to the 
update of 4975 and 4976. Do you incorporate substantial text or examples 
from those RFCs? If not, I'm not sure we need the disclaimer.

(I vaguely recall discussing this before, but maybe that was for a 
different MSRP related draft.)


Ben.

On 10 Jun 2016, at 17:41, Ben Campbell wrote:

> Hi,
>
> This is my AD Evaluation of draft-pd-dispatch-msrp-websocket. I have a 
> few editorial comments, but nothing that should block going to IETF 
> last call. I will request the last call shortly.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Ben.
>
> -----------------------
>
> -1, last paragraph: Consider citing RFC4976 for "MSRP relay". (I also 
> suggest citations to 4975 and 4976 when you talk about "normal" 
> clients and relays.
>
> -5.1, first paragraph: "...messages MUST be routed
>    via an MSRP WebSocket Server"
>
> This seems more a statement of fact than a normative requirement. That 
> is, it is an implication of the fact that websocket clients cannot 
> directly connect to other websocket clients. Please consider removing 
> the upper-case MUST.
>
> - 5.3.1. 4th paragraph (1st after numbered list): s/event/even