[dispatch] AD Evaluation of draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf
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Subject: [dispatch] AD Evaluation of draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf
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Hi, This is my AD Evaluation of draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf. I have a couple of minor comments, neither of which need delay IETF Last Call: -1, 3rd sentence: The sentence sounds like you are saying 5234 requires new values to follow gen-value. I think you mean that 7315 requires that, right? -2: Are there any 2119 keywords in this draft? If not, please delete the 2119 boilerplate and reference. Thanks! Ben.
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