Re: [dispatch] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs-10
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From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
To: Mathias Bynens <mths@google.com>, Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
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Mark: thank you for this review! And thanks to the authors for addressing it. I am moving the document forward to IESG evaluation. Francesca From: Mathias Bynens <mths@google.com> Date: Friday, 3 December 2021 at 13:53 To: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> Cc: art@ietf.org <art@ietf.org>, dispatch@ietf.org <dispatch@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs.all@ietf.org <draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs.all@ietf.org>, last-call@ietf.org <last-call@ietf.org> Subject: Re: Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs-10 Thanks for the feedback! Revision -11 addresses this: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs/11/ On Tue, Oct 26, 2021 at 11:10 PM Mark Nottingham via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote: Reviewer: Mark Nottingham Review result: Ready with Nits This document is ready for publication, with two small nits / questions about the content. ## Nits - In Section 3, the reader is left hanging -- I expected a statement along the lines of 'The media types in this document allow such out of band information to be conveyed.' - Throughout, the phrase 'is not considered part of this document' is a bit odd -- do you mean 'is not controlled by this document' or similar?
- [dispatch] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-… Mark Nottingham via Datatracker
- Re: [dispatch] Artart last call review of draft-i… Mathias Bynens
- Re: [dispatch] Artart last call review of draft-i… Francesca Palombini