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Re: [dmarc-ietf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmarc-arc-protocol-16.txt

Seth Blank <seth@sethblank.com> Wed, 01 August 2018 21:12 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dmarc-ietf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmarc-arc-protocol-16.txt
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On Wed, Aug 1, 2018 at 10:14 AM, Ken O'Driscoll <ken=40wemonitoremail.com@
dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

>
> Apologies if this has already been caught by others.
>
> Just spotted some small typos in section 8. Was reading this specific
> section in connection with something GDPR (the fun!) related.
>
> 8.  Privacy Considerations
>
>    The Authenticated Received Chain provides a verifiable record of the
>    handlers for a message.  This record may include Personally
>    Identifiable Information such as IP address and domain names.  Such
>    information is also including in existing header fields such as the
>    "Received" header field.
>
>
> a) Suggest "IP addresses" to match plural for "domain names" or make it "an
> IP address".
>
> b) Replace "including" with "included" because it's grammatically
> incorrect.
>
> c) Suggest "exiting non-ARC related header fields" to distinguish that
> these are absolutely nothing to do with the protocol. It may be obvious to
> us but  not to those who may discount implementation because they think it
> adds new risk.
>


Thanks for these catches; all suggested changes have been made.



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