[dmarc-ietf] nit in section 7.2

Michael Thomas <mike@mtcc.com> Tue, 26 January 2021 18:59 UTC

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Subject: [dmarc-ietf] nit in section 7.2
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"The report SHOULD include the following data:"

Normative SHOULD here since very strange because what follows is informational, and why would it be SHOULD in the first place?

It seems to me it ought to be:

"The report includes the following data:"

If there are normative requirements, it seems like it would be better to put it into the XML section itself.
  
Mike