Re: [DMM] WGLC reminder

Hi, Pierrick,
Thanks for your comments.
Please see my inline feedback

2016-05-25 

Z.W. Yan 

发件人： pierrick.seite@orange.com 
发送时间： 2016-05-24  18:06:57 
收件人： Jouni.nosmap; dmm@ietf.org 
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主题： Re: [DMM] WGLC reminder 

Hi,
I've read draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum and I think this draft can move forward.
I've just couple of comments/questions
What do you mean by _uplink_ ISP?

Yan: I use "uplink ISP" in the draft to denote the ISP which allocates the HNP set to the PMIPv6 service provider. 
This is confused and I will revise this description maybe as following:
"the HNP set used by a PMIPv6 service provider is assigned by a different Internet Service Provider (ISP) "

s/ which detected the attachment/ which detects the attachment/

Yan: "which detected the attachment" should be "which detects the attachment" 

"[sic.] a scheme is also needed for the LMA to immediately initiate the PMIPv6 binding state refreshment.[snip] The related solution has not been specified. " . But, binding states are updated during renumbering process (depicted on fig. 1), right?

Yan: Yes, it should be "A scheme is also needed for the LMA to immediately initiate the PMIPv6 binding state refreshment during the HNP renumbering process" 

"allocate a new address within the new HNP with a DHCP message" Do you mean DHCPv6 reconfiguration message?

Yan: Yes, this will be revised as "allocate a new address within the new HNP with DHCPv6 reconfiguration messages"

Pierrick
> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : dmm [mailto:dmm-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Jouni.nosmap
> Envoyé : lundi 23 mai 2016 19:17
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> Objet : [DMM] WGLC reminder
> 
> Folks,
> 
> Friendly nudge to do reviews on drafts we got now in WGLC.
> 
> Jouni
> 
> Sent from a smart phone.. Mind the typos..
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