[DMM] Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-dmm-lma-controlled-mag-params-04: (with COMMENT)

[Warren Kumari <[e-mail]>]

Warren Kumari has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dmm-lma-controlled-mag-params-04: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I had a few minor editorial comments:

"LCMPReregistrationStartTime
  This variable is used to set the minimum time interval **in number of
seconds** before the expiry... The default
   value is 10 units, where each unit is 4 seconds."
I understand what it is trying to say, but the "in number of seconds" and
"units of 4 seconds" seemed confusing to me (and I immediately wanted to
try set it to e.g 43 seconds, just because :-))

"LCMPHeartbeatInterval"
  SHOULD NOT be less than 30 seconds or more than 3600 -- why not? If I
choose to DoS myself (or limit my ability to change), isn't that my
choice? (No need to change this, just checking to make sure the numbers
had discussion behind them).