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Re: [dns-privacy] [Ext] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dprive-unilateral-probing-11

Dhruv Dhody <dd@dhruvdhody.com> Thu, 31 August 2023 17:57 UTC

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Date: Thu, 31 Aug 2023 23:27:00 +0530
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Subject: Re: [dns-privacy] [Ext] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dprive-unilateral-probing-11
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Hi Paul,

Thanks for taking my comments into consideration even though I tried
kicking those pesky Can-o-worms :)

Just one thing...


>
> >
> > - Section 6.2, suggest to state clearly why modeling the probability is
> listed
> > under privacy consideration. This is not clear from the current text.
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> Added.
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I did not see any change in 6.2
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-dprive-unilateral-probing-11&url2=draft-ietf-dprive-unilateral-probing-12&difftype=--html

Thanks!
Dhruv

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