Re: [dns-privacy] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dprive-edns0-padding-02.txt

Alex Mayrhofer <alex.mayrhofer.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 28 January 2016 14:05 UTC

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Andreas, 

Thanks for reviewing. Sorry for the typo in your name - I will address this together with changes from iesg processing before publication of the rfc.

Thanks,
Alex 

---- Andreas Gustafsson schrieb ----

>Alex Mayrhofer wrote:
>> This version addresses comments received since the publication of the
>> last draft version, including the WGLC comments.
>
>Looks good to me.  Just a couple of nits:
>
>In Section 6, Security Considerations, "provides only a benefit"
>should be "only provides a benefit".
>
>In section 7, Acknowledgements, "Gustaffson" should be "Gustafsson".
>-- 
>Andreas Gustafsson, gson@araneus.fi