[dns-privacy] Joel Jaeggli's No Objection on draft-ietf-dprive-problem-statement-05: (with COMMENT)

["Joel Jaeggli" <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-dprive-problem-statement-05: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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As an editorial/organizational nit, I would probably consign the actual
description of the dns protocol in the introduction ( paragraph 3/4) to a
subsection so that it can be distinct from the other introductory text
preceding it and the introductory analysis that follow.