Re: [dns-privacy] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-09.txt

Sara Dickinson <sara@sinodun.com> Wed, 09 February 2022 10:09 UTC

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Hi All, 

This update attempts to address the comments we received in IETF Last Call (thanks to all that provided comments):

* Return RFC 8467 to a normative reference after more discussion on padding policies
* Update details of text on port allocation of 853 after discussion with IANA
* Update to security considerations with additional references and text on recursive to auth, zone transfer and general DNS/QUIC security.
* Clarify text on stream usage
* Various typos fixed

Note that we tried to address the Secdir review via this PR which contains some discussion of the points raised: https://github.com/huitema/dnsoquic/pull/145. If there are additional changes needed for this review please let us know by providing text (a PR or new issue in the same repo is welcome). 

Best regards

Sara. 


> On 8 Feb 2022, at 18:38, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the DNS PRIVate Exchange WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : DNS over Dedicated QUIC Connections
>        Authors         : Christian Huitema
>                          Sara Dickinson
>                          Allison Mankin
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-09.txt
> 	Pages           : 33
> 	Date            : 2022-02-08
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document describes the use of QUIC to provide transport privacy
>   for DNS.  The encryption provided by QUIC has similar properties to
>   that provided by TLS, while QUIC transport eliminates the head-of-
>   line blocking issues inherent with TCP and provides more efficient
>   packet loss recovery than UDP.  DNS over QUIC (DoQ) has privacy
>   properties similar to DNS over TLS (DoT) specified in RFC7858, and
>   latency characteristics similar to classic DNS over UDP.  This
>   specification describes the use of DNS over QUIC as a general-purpose
>   transport for DNS and includes the use of DNS over QUIC for stub to
>   recursive, recursive to authoritative, and zone transfer scenarios.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic/
> 
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-09
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-09
> 
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
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