Re: [dnsdir] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-07

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Hi Ralf, 

Thank you for the review. 

Please see inline. 

Cheers,
Med

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> Objet : Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-
> encrypted-dns-07
> 
> Reviewer: Ralf Weber
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> Moin!
> 
> I'm the assigned reviewer of the DNS Directorate for this draft.
> Given that the add working group defines drafts for getting
> encrypted DNS resolver settings to clients I was initially
> surprised to see this draft coming from ops area to the DNS
> directorate for review.
> 
> However looking into while reviewing it is this has become clear
> as the attributes defined by add DNR draft are just one user of
> the specification of this draft. The draft uses and existing
> specifications on interactions between DHCP and Radius and adds
> DNR as one use case. As such while the draft was started with,
> explains this use case and does so fine there is not much for the
> DNS directorate to review.
> 

[Med] FWIW, the WGLC was also shared with ADD, RADEXT, and DHC. This is a cross-area effort :-) 

> I see this draft as ready with the following nits:
> - The table of attributes under 7 Table of attributes only have
> two values which both start with 0. As the main distinction is
> that attributes MUST NOT appear when 0 is there and MAY appeare
> when 0+ is defined making this boolean with e.g Y/N seems easier
> to understand IMHO.

[Med] This is a well-established RADIUS nomenclature. We prefer to maintain it. Thanks.


 - In 8.1 New Radius Attributes the table is
> called "Table 1: Encrypted DNS RADIUS Attributes", while the table
> describer generic DHCP Options attributes. The table name should
> reflect that.
> 

[Med] Good catch. Fixed.  

> So long
> -Ralf
> 
> 


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