[DNSOP] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-isp-ip6rdns-07: (with COMMENT)

Suresh Krishnan <suresh@kaloom.com> Thu, 27 September 2018 02:41 UTC

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Subject: [DNSOP] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-isp-ip6rdns-07: (with COMMENT)
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draft-ietf-dnsop-isp-ip6rdns-07: No Objection

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* Section 1.2.

"and may be short-lived."

Maybe worth adding a reference to RFC4941 here (already in the references).
"and may be short-lived. e.g. temporary addresses from [RFC4941]"

* Section 2.3.1. and 2.3.2.

RFC6106 has been obsoleted. Replace with reference to RFC8106