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Re: [DNSOP] Robert Wilton's Yes on draft-ietf-dnsop-caching-resolution-failures-07: (with COMMENT)

"Wessels, Duane" <dwessels@verisign.com> Tue, 19 September 2023 17:27 UTC

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From: "Wessels, Duane" <dwessels@verisign.com>
To: Robert Wilton <rwilton@cisco.com>
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Thread-Topic: [EXTERNAL] Robert Wilton's Yes on draft-ietf-dnsop-caching-resolution-failures-07: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Robert Wilton's Yes on draft-ietf-dnsop-caching-resolution-failures-07: (with COMMENT)
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> On Sep 5, 2023, at 3:52 AM, Robert Wilton via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> Hi,
> 
> Thanks for working on this document - I'm not a DNS expert but it looks like good advice.
> 
> A couple of minor comments for your consideration:
> 
> (1) p 2, sec 1.  Introduction
> 
>   This document updates [RFC2308] to require negative caching of DNS
>   resolution failures and provides additional examples of resolution
>   failures.
> 
> Perhaps "caching of all DNS resolution failures"?

Agreed.

> 
> 
> (2) p 2, sec 1.1.  Motivation
> 
>   RFC Editor: We'd like your thoughts on moving the Motivation and
>   Related Work sections to appendices.  Is that a preferred style?
> 
> Not the RFC editor, but I would keep the motivation here, as a subsection of the introduction.

Excellent, thanks for the feedback.

DW

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