Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-17.txt

[Bob Harold <[e-mail]>]

On Tue, Oct 23, 2018 at 3:49 PM <[e-mail]> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Domain Name System Operations WG of the
> IETF.
>
>         Title           : DNS Stateful Operations
>         Authors         : Ray Bellis
>                           Stuart Cheshire
>                           John Dickinson
>                           Sara Dickinson
>                           Ted Lemon
>                           Tom Pusateri
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-17.txt
>         Pages           : 66
>         Date            : 2018-10-23
>
> Abstract:
>    This document defines a new DNS OPCODE for DNS Stateful Operations
>    (DSO).  DSO messages communicate operations within persistent
>    stateful sessions, using type-length-value (TLV) syntax.  Three TLVs
>    are defined that manage session timeouts, termination, and encryption
>    padding, and a framework is defined for extensions to enable new
>    stateful operations.  This document updates RFC 1035 by adding a new
>    DNS header opcode which has different message semantics, and a new
>    result code.  This document updates RFC 7766 by redefining a session,
>    providing new guidance on connection re-use, and providing a new
>    mechanism for handling session idle timeouts.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-17
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-17
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-17


Page 6
"Early Data"
The last phrase:
"a TCP SYN message that does not use TLS
      encapsulation but contains is not permitted."
 Seems to be missing something, like "but contains early data is not
permitted."
Was there in the previous version, but accidentally deleted?

-- 
Bob Harold