[DNSOP] Mahesh Jethanandani's No Objection on charter-ietf-dnsop-04-01: (with COMMENT)

[Mahesh Jethanandani via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Mahesh Jethanandani has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-dnsop-04-01: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I am clearing my BLOCK but I agree with Paul that some angst around lack of visibility
about the split. Therefore, a mention of the split after DELEG is done is worth mentioning.

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>  WG also provides guidance and elaborates best current practices for DNS dep
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A determiner may be missing.