Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-15.txt

"John R. Levine" <> Sun, 04 November 2018 04:54 UTC

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> I'm also somewhat confused by the quoting in:
> "In the case of the "SRV" "RR" and "URI" "RR", distinguishing among
> different types"  (and in "defining "RR"s that might" ) - I'm not sure if
> it is intentional, but it doesn't align with much of the rest of the
> formatting, and is (IMO) confusing around the first part.)

That's xml2rfc being helpful.  The xml says those are verbatim strings and 
it added the quotes.  I presume the editors can fix this.

> Probably nit: Section 2:
> "Only global underscored names are registered in the IANA Underscore
> Only the global underscored names "_service1", "_service2", Global
> table.  (From the example, that would mean registering "_service3",
> "_service4", and "_authority" are registered in the IANA _service1,
> _service2, _service3, _service 4, and _authority.)"
> First sentence repeats.

In xml it is clear that two lines of old text weren't deleted.

I stared at the table of names and I think it's right, but it's the meat 
of the document and more people looking at it would be good.

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