Re: [DNSOP] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08: (with COMMENT)

Peter Thomassen <peter@desec.io> Tue, 03 January 2023 16:31 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Erik,

Thank you for your review!

On 12/22/22 21:02, Erik Kline via Datatracker wrote:
> Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08: No Objection
> 
...
> ## Nits
> 
> ### S4.3
> 
> * "Member-specific properties are described in Section 4.3" ->
>    "Member-specific properties are described in Section 4.4"

Done.

> ### S4.4.2.1
> 
> * S4.3.1 has quotation marks around the contents of the TXT record, whereas
>    this section does not.  Recommend standardizing on one format, and probably
>    the one with surrounding quotation marks, i.e.:
> 
>    group.<unique-1>.zones.$CATZ  0 IN TXT    "nodnssec"
>    group.<unique-2>.zones.$CATZ  0 IN TXT    "operator-x-sign-with-nsec3"
>    group.<unique-2>.zones.$CATZ  0 IN TXT    "operator-y-nsec3"
> 
>    Although, perhaps I've misunderstood something and this is not relevant.
Done.

These changes are part of this PR that will be merged together with changes from other reviews: https://github.com/NLnetLabs/draft-toorop-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones/pull/55/commits

Best,
Peter

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