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Re: [DNSOP] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Thu, 22 December 2022 12:23 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2022 14:22:39 +0200
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08
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Russ, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

(I did re-raise your concern below; authors please take note.)

Lars


> On Dec 3, 2022, at 21:17, Russ Housley via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review result: Almost Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review Date: 2022-12-03
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-12-13
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> 
> Summary: Almost Ready
> 
> 
> Major Concerns: None
> 
> 
> Minor Concerns:
> 
> The document lacks an IANA Considerations section.  Please add one,
> even if it says that there are no actions for IANA and asks the
> RFC Editor to remove the section when the document is published.
> Such a section provides clarity during IANA review of the document.
> 
> Section 3 says:
> 
>   Catalog consumers MUST ignore any RR in the catalog zone which is
>   meaningless to or otherwise not supported by the implementation.
> 
> I am unsure what is meant by "meaningless".  Please define the term
> or provide some explanation.
> 
> 
> Nits:
> 
> Section 2 provides a list to definitions.  Please add some form of
> punctuation after the word being defined (a colon or a hypen or
> something else to aid the reader).
> 
> 
> Note:
> 
> I did not review Appendix A or Appendix B.
> 
> 
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