Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-5966bis-06.txt

Hi All, 

This update addresses the comments from the IESG reviews:

- Introduction: Add reference to DNS-over-TLS
- Section 5: 's/it/the resolver/' and 's/fallback/retry/'
- Section 6.1.1: Make clear behaviour is 'at the time of writing', not a recommendation
- Section 6.2.1.1: Change SHOULD to MUST.
- Section 6.2.2: Clarify 'operational reasons' for zone transfers.
- Section 8: Re-word to remove reference to TCP segments.
- Section 9: Add sentence about use of TFO with DNS privacy solutions.

Regards

Sara. 

> On 15 Jan 2016, at 15:09, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Domain Name System Operations Working Group of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : DNS Transport over TCP - Implementation Requirements
>        Authors         : John Dickinson
>                          Sara Dickinson
>                          Ray Bellis
>                          Allison Mankin
>                          Duane Wessels
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-dnsop-5966bis-06.txt
> 	Pages           : 21
> 	Date            : 2016-01-15
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document specifies the requirement for support of TCP as a
>   transport protocol for DNS implementations and provides guidelines
>   towards DNS-over-TCP performance on par with that of DNS-over-UDP.
>   This document obsoletes RFC5966 and therefore updates RFC1035 and
>   RFC1123.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-5966bis/
> 
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> 
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