[DNSOP] draft-jabley-reverse-servers-00
Alfred Hönes <ah@TR-Sys.de> Fri, 13 November 2009 14:43 UTC
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Subject: [DNSOP] draft-jabley-reverse-servers-00
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I have studied the draft proposing a new 'regular' naming scheme
for the IN-ADDR.ARPA. and IP6.ARPA. zone,
draft-jabley-reverse-servers-00 ,
and fully support this proposal.
Nits I found in the draft:
(1) Abstract
| ... These zones contain data which facilitates reverse mapping ...
--- ^^^
| ... These zones contain data which facilitate reverse mapping ...
^^
(2) Section 1, 2th para
This document specifies a dedicated and stable set of nameserver
| names for each of the IN-ADDR.ARP and IP6.ARPA zones.
--- ^^
This document specifies a dedicated and stable set of nameserver
| names for each of the IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA zones.
^^^
(3) Appendix B.2.2
There are a couple of copyedit flaws, missing necessary changes
relative to B.2.1, in particular:
- all instances of "IN-ADDR.ARP" should be "IP6.ARPA";
- the parenthetical clause in the 2nd bullet #1,
"(which is not authoritative for the IN-ADDR.ARPA zone)",
is irrelevant in this context and should be deleted.
[ please check ]
Kind regards,
Alfred.
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- [DNSOP] draft-jabley-reverse-servers-00 Alfred Hönes
- Re: [DNSOP] draft-jabley-reverse-servers-00 Joe Abley