Re: [dnssd] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnssd-push-18.txt

Stuart Cheshire <cheshire@apple.com> Sat, 23 March 2019 19:28 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dnssd] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnssd-push-18.txt
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Thanks for your feedback Jan. I have updated the document as you suggested.

Stuart Cheshire

On 22 Mar 2019, at 22:02, Jan Komissar (jkomissa) <jkomissa@cisco.com> wrote:

> Hi,
> 
> A couple of comments:
> 6.3.1 PUSH Message
> Pg 22, para 3: 
> ============
> In the draft:
>   … and names
>   appearing within only the RDATA of the following DNS types should be
>   compressed:
> 
>      NS, CNAME, PTR, DNAME, SOA, MX, AFSDB, RT, KX, RP, PX, SRV, NSEC
> 
> Suggested:
>   … and names
>   appearing within RDATA should only be compressed in/for the following RR types :
> 
>      NS, CNAME, PTR, DNAME, SOA, MX, AFSDB, RT, KX, RP, PX, SRV, NSEC
> 
> Pg 22, para 4:
> ===========
> Considering that clients MUST treat PUSH messages larger than 16382 bytes as a fatal error, I suggest changing
> 
> the change notifications SHOULD
>   be communicated in separate PUSH messages
> 
> to
> 
> the change notifications MUST
>   be communicated in separate PUSH messages
> 
> pg 33, Line 3, last word:
> ===================
> "Sever" should be "Server."
> 
> Regards,
> 
> Jan.