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Re: [dnssd] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-15.txt

Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com> Mon, 19 September 2022 15:42 UTC

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From: Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com>
Date: Mon, 19 Sep 2022 11:41:57 -0400
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Subject: Re: [dnssd] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-15.txt
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Thanks for catching that. I’ve updated the draft in the repo, so this
should get caught in the next revision.

Op ma 19 sep. 2022 om 11:26 schreef Esko Dijk <esko.dijk@iotconsultancy.nl>

> Thanks Ted for the updated version! The changes look good and the comments
> have been addressed.
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> There was one sentence probably missing the word “expires”:
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> If the server fails to renew its service registration before the KEY lease
> (Section 4 of
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>    [I-D.ietf-dnssd-update-lease
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-15#ref-I-D.ietf-dnssd-update-lease>]),
> its name is no longer protected.
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> -> “before the KEY lease expires, … “
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> Regards
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> Esko
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> *From:* dnssd <dnssd-bounces@ietf.org> *On Behalf Of * Ted Lemon
> *Sent:* Wednesday, September 14, 2022 20:36
> *To:* dnssd@ietf.org
> *Cc:* i-d-announce@ietf.org
> *Subject:* Re: [dnssd] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-15.txt
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> FYI, this update should address all the comments we got during last call.
> Thanks everyone for reviewing! Please let me know if you think I missed
> something, but hopefully we're done.
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> On Wed, Sep 14, 2022 at 2:35 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Extensions for Scalable DNS Service
> Discovery WG of the IETF.
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>         Title           : Service Registration Protocol for DNS-Based
> Service Discovery
>         Authors         : Ted Lemon
>                           Stuart Cheshire
>   Filename        : draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-15.txt
>   Pages           : 32
>   Date            : 2022-09-14
>
> Abstract:
>    The Service Registration Protocol for DNS-Based Service Discovery
>    uses the standard DNS Update mechanism to enable DNS-Based Service
>    Discovery using only unicast packets.  This makes it possible to
>    deploy DNS Service Discovery without multicast, which greatly
>    improves scalability and improves performance on networks where
>    multicast service is not an optimal choice, particularly 802.11
>    (Wi-Fi) and 802.15.4 (IoT) networks.  DNS-SD Service registration
>    uses public keys and SIG(0) to allow services to defend their
>    registrations against attack.
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>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnssd-srp/
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> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-15.html
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> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-15
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> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org:
> :internet-drafts
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