Re: [dnssd] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04

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On 23 Dec, 2014, at 19:03, Ted Lemon <ted.lemon@nominum.com> wrote:

> Why not update the document to say so explicitly, and fix the idnits while you're at it?

I have added some text to clarify this.

   REQ2:   For use cases C, D, and E, there should be a way to configure
           Scopes of Discovery that support a range of topologically-
           independent zones (e.g., from department to campus-wide).
           This capability must exist in the protocol; individual
           operators are not required to use this capability in all
           cases -- in particular, use case C should support Zero
           Configuration operation where that is desired.

We should let the RFC Editor update the references at publication time -- there’s little benefit in chasing a moving target.

Stuart Cheshire