Re: [Doh] [Ext] A question of trust (was Re: Draft -09 and WGLC #2)

Mateusz Jończyk <mat.jonczyk@o2.pl> Thu, 31 May 2018 22:46 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Doh] [Ext] A question of trust (was Re: Draft -09 and WGLC #2)
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Please note that "URI Template" is specified later in the text (in "The HTTP
Request") and its usage is not clear in section "Selection of DNS API Server").

This term should be explained in "Selection of DNS API Server", e.g.:
	Configuration, discovery, and updating of the URI Template (and thus the
	DNS API server) is done out of band from this ...

Other that that, the pull request is OK to me.

Greetings,
Mateusz
	

W dniu 31.05.2018 o 23:56, Paul Hoffman pisze:
> I have submitted this as a pull request:
>    https://github.com/dohwg/draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https/pull/190
> I actually moved the whole paragraph (not just the sentence) up before adding the clarifications about updating config and config examples.
> 
> --Paul Hoffman