Re: [Dots] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-28: (with COMMENT)

<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Thu, 02 May 2019 07:44 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dots] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-28: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Adam, 

Fixed all these nits. 

Thank you. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Adam Roach via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org]
> Envoyé : jeudi 2 mai 2019 08:47
> À : The IESG
> Cc : draft-ietf-dots-data-channel@ietf.org; Roman Danyliw; dots-
> chairs@ietf.org; rdd@cert.org; dots@ietf.org
> Objet : Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-28: (with
> COMMENT)
> 
> Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-28: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> Thanks to everyone who worked on this document. Alexey covered all of my
> substantive comments, and I support his DISCUSS; I only have a few editorial
> nits to suggest.
> 
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> ID Nits reports:
> 
>   ** There is 1 instance of too long lines in the document, the longest one
>      being 5 characters in excess of 72.
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> 
> §3.4:
> 
> >  its own information (e.g., server names, literal IP addresses) is
> >  present in the "Via" header of a DOTS message it receives:
> 
> Nit: "...header field..."
> 
> >     header, the DOTS gateway MUST NOT forward the DOTS message.
> 
> Nit: "...header field..."
> 
> >  error-info:     <via-header> : A copy of the Via header when
> 
> Nit: "<via-header-field>...header field..."
> 
> >  o  Otherwise, the DOTS agent MUST update or insert the "Via" header
> >     by appending its own information.
> 
> Nit: "...header field..."
> 
> >  DOTS client domain SHOULD remove the previous "Via" header
> >  information after checking for a loop before forwarding.  This
> 
> Nit: "...header field..."
>