[Dots] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-rfc8782-bis-07: (with COMMENT)

[Robert Wilton via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-dots-rfc8782-bis-07: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Hi,

I only reviewed the delta from RFC 8782.  Just a couple of minor comments.

I think that the revision description in the ietf-dots-signal-channel YANG
module should clearly indicate that it is a non-backwards compatible
replacement of the previous module revision.

The description of the "dots-signal" structure and "message-type" choice makes
no mention of the "heartbeat" case.  Is that intentional?

Thanks,
Rob