Re: [Dots] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-06: (with COMMENT)

mohamed.boucadair@orange.com Thu, 25 June 2020 10:31 UTC

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To: Éric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Dots] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-06: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Eric, 

Thanks for the review. 

Please see inline. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Éric Vyncke via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org]
> Envoyé : jeudi 25 juin 2020 12:18
> À : The IESG
> Cc : draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control@ietf.org; dots-chairs@ietf.org;
> dots@ietf.org; Valery Smyslov; Liang Xia; frank.xialiang@huawei.com
> Objet : Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-
> control-06: (with COMMENT)
> 
> 
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
> Thank you for the work put into this document.
> 
> I appreciated the clarity, the use of IPv6 examples, and the inclusion of
> the
> YANG model.
> 
> Only one minor suggestion about the title of section 1.2 as "The Solution"
> looks a little marketing ;-)

[Med] That’s not the intent :-) This was vs. "The Problem" in Sec 1.1  

 I would prefer "Mitigation Technique" or
> something
> more 'engineering-oriented'
> 

[Med] Happily. Changed to "Controlling Filtering Rules Using DOTS Signal Channel". 

> Regards
> 
> -éric
> 
> 


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[Dots] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-d… Éric Vyncke via Datatracker
Re: [Dots] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ie… mohamed.boucadair
Re: [Dots] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ie… Eric Vyncke (evyncke)