[Dots] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-24: (with COMMENT)

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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-24: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I'll insert my usual whining here about six authors when our preferred limit is five.

And now, a few nits:

Section 2:

* "... may be composed by a cluster of hardware  ..." -- s/by a/of a/ ?

OLD:
      Each service subscription
      usually involve Service Level Agreement (SLA) that have to be met.
NEW:
      Each service subscription
      usually involves one or more Service Level Agreements (SLAs) that have to be met.
NEW 2:
      Each service subscription
      usually involves a Service Level Agreement (SLA) that has to be met.

Section 3.1:

* "... considers two kind of DDoS Mitigation ..." -- s/kind/kinds/

* "... decreased to the certain level ..." -- s/to the/to a/ ?