[drinks] Stephen Farrell's No Objection on draft-ietf-drinks-spp-framework-09: (with COMMENT)

"Stephen Farrell" <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Thu, 05 February 2015 11:58 UTC

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Subject: [drinks] Stephen Farrell's No Objection on draft-ietf-drinks-spp-framework-09: (with COMMENT)

Stephen Farrell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-drinks-spp-framework-09: No Objection

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- Figure 2: What is "rant" here? I don't see that
explained. I guess registrant but had to wait for 5.1
to see that.

- 6.2, p20, para 1: s/Identity/Identifier/ here?

- 9.5: That's a surprise and I bet isn't met by any
reasonable protocol.

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