Small changes in -msg-fmt-08
Pete Resnick <presnick@qualcomm.com> Thu, 27 January 2000 04:00 UTC
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From: Pete Resnick <presnick@qualcomm.com>
Subject: Small changes in -msg-fmt-08
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I've sent out the post-Last-Call document. It is, as usual, out on my Web server until it gets posted. See: <http://resnick1.qualcomm.com/draft-ietf-drums-msg-fmt-08.txt> Mostly typographical, grammatical, and simplification recommendations by Graham Klyne and Keith Moore, and a couple of other folks. I don't think any should be controversial; please send to the DRUMS main list if there are. Other than typos and strictly grammatical changes, here's the list: Throughout: Change references from BCP 14 to RFC 2119 and ABNF to RFC 2234 1.2 Clarify last paragraph before the note 2.2: Strike first sentence; Clarify folding note 3.2.3: Simplify CFWS to *([FWS] comment) [FWS]; Remove 127 from ctext 3.2.5: Remove 127 from qtext 3.2.6: Remove 127 from unstructured; Added utext 3.3: No [FWS] required after day-of-week, year, day; Clarify time zone description 3.4: Simplify sentence 2 of "Note:"; Clarify use of named list 3.4.1: Remove 127 from dtext; Clarify domain portion paragraph 3.5: 998 maximum a MUST, not a MAY 3.6.2: Fourth sentence - change "may" to "MAY"; Add to end of Reply description 3.6.3: Clarify reply text in last paragraph before the note 3.6.4: Rewrote In-Reply-To and References discussion (did *not* include the bit about removal of long entries or space between ids); Added last paragraph 4: Clarify first paragraph; Clarify folding comment 4.1: Added obs-utext 4.3: Rewrote alphabetic time zone text; Clarified last paragraph 4.4: obs-local-part now contains word instead of atom; Added last paragraph 5. Added to first paragraph Examples: Changed date examples from 1869 to 1969 -- Pete Resnick <mailto:presnick@qualcomm.com> Eudora Engineering - QUALCOMM Incorporated Ph: (217)337-6377 or (858)651-4478, Fax: (858)651-1102
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