[dtn] Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-eid-pattern-08.txt

[Erik Kline <[e-mail]>]

Brian,

Thanks for this; sorry for the late review; and I think this is ready for
WGLC.

# Independent reviewer comments for draft-ietf-dtn-eid-pattern-08
CC @ekline

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* Overall: ready, with nits, for WGLC

## Comments

### S2.1.1

* "all other characters ... can be part of a scheme-specific pattern"

  Do we need to exclude NUL, and various control or unattached combining
  characters, etc?

  Would RFC 5198 be helpful here? Section 2 has some good constraining
  text, but it's likely that item 2 and/or item 3 could be problematic.

### S2.4

* Some ADs like to ask that "SHOULD" and "SHOULD NOT" be accompanied by
  an explanation of the impact of violating the SHOULD/SHOULD NOT.

  I think in this case one consequence might be that a text to internal
  representation back to text cycle could produce logically equivalent
  but different text representations.

### S2.4.3

* I think this was discussed at some point, but since the final
  paragraph says "[t]he canonical text form SHALL encode all intervals
  with the lower bound before the upper bound" do we need to keep the
  earlier relaxation that "decoders SHALL handle both possible orderings
  of interval bounds"?

  I guess this is really a question about the utility of non-canonical
  forms.

## Nits

### S1

* "not be able to express of exact numeric ranges"

  Something awkward in here; I'm guessing a missing word/phrase?

### S2

* "an pattern-using" -> "a pattern-using"

### S7.1

* RFC 4632 is given as a Normative reference but my reading of where it's
  referenced in this document suggests it's actually Informative.

  Similarly, RFC 9525 seems mostly to be used to define analogous
  processing/interpretation and may also be Informative.

### S7.2

* RFC 5912 is used in a normative section (Appendix A) and should
  probably be in the Normative section.

On Wed, Jun 10, 2026 at 12:24 PM Brian Sipos <[e-mail]>
wrote:

> All,
> This small update of the EID Patterns draft expands a full Operational
> Considerations section to add to the enveloping explanations (which were
> already present in the previous version). This does not make any technical
> change to the document, but does add new interop topics under that section.
> There are no outstanding issues known on this draft.
>
> Brian S.
>
> On Wed, Jun 10, 2026 at 10:46 AM <[e-mail]> wrote:
>
>> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-dtn-eid-pattern-08.txt is now available. It is a
>> work item of the Delay/Disruption Tolerant Networking (DTN) WG of the
>> IETF.
>>
>>    Title:   Bundle Protocol Endpoint ID Patterns
>>    Author:  Brian Sipos
>>    Name:    draft-ietf-dtn-eid-pattern-08.txt
>>    Pages:   34
>>    Dates:   2026-06-10
>>
>> Abstract:
>>
>>    This document extends the Bundle Protocol Endpoint ID (EID) concept
>>    into an EID Pattern, which is used to categorize any EID as matching
>>    a specific pattern or not.  EID Patterns are suitable for expressing
>>    configuration, for being used on-the-wire by protocols, and for being
>>    easily understandable by a layperson.  EID Patterns include scheme-
>>    specific optimizations for expressing set membership and each scheme
>>    pattern includes text and binary encoding forms; the pattern for the
>>    "ipn" EID scheme being designed to be highly compressible in its
>>    binary form.  This document also defines a Public Key Infrastructure
>>    Using X.509 (PKIX) Other Name form to contain an EID Pattern and a
>>    handling rule to use a pattern to match an EID.
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dtn-eid-pattern/
>>
>> There is also an HTML version available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dtn-eid-pattern-08.html
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-dtn-eid-pattern-08
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
>> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
>>
>>
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